AFL Grand Final – Haiku Bob – a thin mist

 

 

Grand final day
every seat taken
on the couch

 

clouds black and blue
the crunch of bodies
to kill the ball

 

 

no goals…
wild applause greets
a smother

 

 

shots for goal
sprayed far and wide
like Goddard’s nose

 

 

all day the rain Ablett not falling

 

 

last quarter
the big men
begin to sway

 

 

a gap opens up
in the clouds
Scarlett’s toe-poke

 

 

as a team
the losers drop
to their knees

 

 

September dusk
a thin mist covers
Riewoldt’s eyes

 

 

a shard of light
on every blade –
rain mixes with tears

Comments

  1. Beautiful stuff, Rob.

  2. Peter Flynn says

    HB,
    Gotta love the toe-poke.

  3. HB – someone has to lose I suppose. Very interested to get the views of those not emotionally involved in the game.

  4. for some curious reason Dips, I tend to gravitate towards the losers…
    I don’t think I’ve seen more tears shed after a game than this one though.

    thanks Gigs

    and yes, Pete, i think the toe-poke is back!

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