first bounce of the Sherrin
a rush of blood
in my heart
Easter Sunday –
Cloke from dead in front
Jesus!!
twilight game
the search for gaps
in the shadows
clash of heads –
the sun slides off
the stadium roof
Easter weekend –
Holy crap!
What a mark!
Easter Sunday –
we start the last
one man down
afterglow –
the game ends
with a one-hander
About rob scott
Rob Scott (aka Haiku Bob) is a peripatetic haiku poet who calls Victoria Park home. He writes haiku in between teaching whisky and drinking English, or something like that.
Good to see you AND the Pies on song in Round 1, HB.
Did you watch it “live”?
Love the Easter references HB. When reading, I inserted my own comma after the word “dead” in the second verse.
HB,
This is the first time I’ve read the phrase ‘holy crap’ in a haiku.
Terrific.
Looking forward to the Round 2 haiku.
Even within the structure of a haiku, there are plenty of one-syllable words that can be used to describe Mick Madhouse.
PF
MOC – yes. Sweden is a land full of streams and I always manage to find the dodgy ones.
Flynny – re madhouse, psychopathic egomaniac are not two of them.
and one for you:
Easter Monday –
the gathered assembly
in praise of Pod
HB.
Super stuff HB!
Let’s hope you are still painting similar pictures of the Pies deep into September.