Round 8 – Richmond v Sydney: The Drive Home

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The Drive Home – click to enlarge

Into the dark

of night,

heading

home,

 

from

a dwelling

of God’s own.

 

Gates down

ding, ding and

BT sounding,

over

kids in the back,

a gentle

idle-engine, humming.

 

Shoosh,

quiet

 

iridescent light, flashing scarlet,

the night pauses,

for a bit.

 

It’s over

it’s over

turn it off.

 

The ball

somewhere,

non-Richmond end

22 tickings, chances

remote.

 

Keep going

keep going,

a pass,

a chip

and a little one over the top,

 

what

 

a good bounce

to a long boot

to where….

 

No, don’t turn it off

slap.

 

Limbs retract

as shadows loom, somewhere

and breathless rumbling, pummels

the tracks

clack, clack

in time,

Broady bound.

 

LLOYD, LLOYDY

a mark

with tickings, somewhere

to go

 

it’s Pentecost

and confirmation,

a holy spirit, now

bestowing

gifts, just perhaps.

 

The outside din

abates,

and a siren, shrill

within,

oh, for a kick

after….

 

Turn it up,

turn it up

 

Be quiet,

be quiet

 

Lloyd for goal

45 out

at an angle, odd

it goes,

somewhere

 

through the middle.

 

GEE WHIZ!

 

A rising fever

with a maddened crowd

and BT’s bellows, and

dashboard shudders

and thumpings,

within

 

as panes wound down

to remove the stifled heat

from the air,

and the air from the stifled heat;

 

and the dark from the dark, darkness

of a season

falling,

away.

 

Melodies flung, da de da

together

with shimmers

of cheer

and glory,

 

and Allelulia

spreading a ripple, wide

across sharpened shadows of northern abodes

and all around.

 

On this,

now bright and clear night.

 

 

 

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Comments

  1. Phillip Dimitriadis says:

    Captured the feeling beautifully, Kate, religious fervour and all. Putting the scarf out on the drive home is a thrill for kids big and small. Kudos

  2. Peter_B says:

    Brilliant, Kate. You had me there with you.
    I’ll have what she was having.

  3. The power of one point!

  4. Great stuff, Kate.
    Most enjoyable.

  5. I did exactly the same thing, Kate!
    Nothing more exhilarating than driving with the windows wound all the way down, cold air rushing in, and the best song in the world blaring from the radio.
    It was a good night.

  6. yes, Kate, i was thinking Ecclesiastes at one point, a time for even Richmond to win a close one etc

    scarf draped provocatively across my desk partition, king of the office in a worlds of plucked Swans, on top of the world, for a week, at least.

  7. Thanks for the comments all. I thought I’d nailed the idea and words Monday morning, but then spent the rest of the day trying to chisel it out ‘properly’ whatever that is….once you start, you can’t stop.never the less, I hadn’t planned on spending a whole day on it!! Surely I had better things to be doing? Obviously not.

    Anyway, a classic moment, inspired as much by the radio commentary, and the fact that we couldn’t see what was happening, along with the disillusioned 11 yr old in the back seat who didn’t want to listen to what he thought would happen.

    We were in fact stopped at the Buckley street Xing in Essendon … Forever etched n my mind now with the evening.

    Make the most of this week tiger fans

  8. Malcolm Ashwood says:

    Sensational as always,Kate

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