AFL Round 1 – North Melbourne v Collingwood (Haiku Bob): afterglow

first bounce of the Sherrin
a rush of blood
in my heart

 

 

Easter Sunday –
Cloke from dead in front
Jesus!!

 

 

twilight game
the search for gaps
in the shadows

 

 

clash of heads –
the sun slides off
the stadium roof

 

 

Easter weekend –
Holy crap!
What a mark!

 

 

Easter Sunday –
we start the last
one man down

 

 

 

afterglow –
the game ends
with a one-hander

 

About rob scott

Rob Scott (aka Haiku Bob) is a Melbourne-born resident of Sweden who spent his adolsecence in Queensland. He has also had stints in Japan and The Netherlands but calls Victoria Park home. He writes haiku in between teaching whisky and drinking English, or something like that.

Comments

  1. Good to see you AND the Pies on song in Round 1, HB.

    Did you watch it “live”?

  2. Andrew Fithall says:

    Love the Easter references HB. When reading, I inserted my own comma after the word “dead” in the second verse.

  3. Peter Flynn says:

    HB,

    This is the first time I’ve read the phrase ‘holy crap’ in a haiku.

    Terrific.

    Looking forward to the Round 2 haiku.

    Even within the structure of a haiku, there are plenty of one-syllable words that can be used to describe Mick Madhouse.

    PF

  4. haikubob says:

    MOC – yes. Sweden is a land full of streams and I always manage to find the dodgy ones.

    Flynny – re madhouse, psychopathic egomaniac are not two of them.

    and one for you:

    Easter Monday –
    the gathered assembly
    in praise of Pod

    HB.

  5. Super stuff HB!

    Let’s hope you are still painting similar pictures of the Pies deep into September.

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